狠求大家狠評,本人為2016自修生,上網睇過關於lucky village 的其他文章,亦有參考當中的idea.希望大家能評下我的作文,讓我有所得著,謝謝大家。
The Local History Newsletter is a newsletter about the history of Hong Kong. Every month, it printsshort articles about special places in Hong Kong. you have been asked to write an article about an old village called Lucky Village. Write your article using the three headings provided. you can use the headings in any order.
What lucky village is famous for(只寫呢part先)
lucky village is famous for its"lucky beef noodles". "Lucky beef noodles"have a legendary.Once upon a time, there was a old man lived in this small village.The old men called "Lucky" who was a good cook.He enjoyed finding different foods for cooking.One day, he found some special seasoning and then done a famous dish "lucky beef noodles".Legend has it that, have a woman had eaten his "lucky beef noodles" then a handsome men date her.Another rumor, have a man had eaten his "beef noodles" then he won the jackpot. As long as you eat "lucky beef noodles", you will be lucky.Thus,it was be "Lucky village".
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本帖最後由 珊珊來遲 於 2016-2-19 01:03 PM 編輯 ]