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原帖由 autodidactsara 於 2016-2-22 01:16 PM 發表
英文底不錯
不過故事有D爛尾...而且有D甜故feel (爆)
考試局未必會接受... (真)
Hey @autodidactsara,
Thanks for your comment, it's my first time writing short stories - it is hard to limit myself in 400 words. I'm trying to bring out something deeper, such as the differences in the poor and the privileged by some character portraits. I am aware that the markers will not spend so much time looking into such details. But hopefully, this will be a good academic sharing
Thanks for your comment again haha. Next time I may add more sweetness to it.