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A number of children became orphans because of the sichuanearthquake.You have just read in a newspaper a story of a child calledWeian wholost his parents in the earthquake. Write a letter to comfortWeian .Start your letter" Dear Weuan', and sign it ' Chris Wong'. Don'twriteany adress

Dear Weian

Is everything okay now , Weian? . Disaster was out of our expectation.Wehave no ability to struggle with an inevitability but to suffer fromit speechlessly. Every calamity causes lots of deaths and injuries.Deathis a process that we all must pass. Looking away will be betterbut not bittered.


I am convinced that the day of Sichuan Earthquake was engraved onyour memory deeply. i know that you got a sense of guilty owingto witnessing the death of your parents. you accused yourself ofdoing nothing to rescue your parents. Don't be too depressed with it,how can a child conquer with such an immense catastrophe? You may thinkof commiting suicide to end your precious life. Listen carefully, itis not what your parents want. What you can do is to be an indepententboy. For the sake of your parents, for the sake of yourself and forthesake of thousands and millions of victims in this earthquake. Lifeisvaluable.

Despite losing your parents, you are not living alone, Alongsidewithyou are thousands of children. But they have a dream whichis fulfilling the dream of their parents. Some are studying hardwhile some are crying. Which one do you want to be? If crying can revivethelife of your parents, you can keep crying. If it is useless ,stop crying and do the thing which is worth doing it. Bear in mind,studyingin university is every parents's dream. Give you a try , try tostudyhard.

You need not worry about the fee of your study. Provided that youarewilling to study, we are here to help you. Also, some charitiesarealso allocating money on helping victims to study. Without parents,you should be more perseverant , more indepentent. Even whenyourparents cannot take care of you anymore, they are looking at youinsomewhere and giving you a forever blessing. Your parents are nothere,but their love is surrounding you. Don't give up! Make adifferent life!

yours sincerely
Chris Wong

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level 5 應該一定有
alongside 好似唔跟with
因為alongside similar to with 已經...

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好多好深既字我都唔識...
應該有level 5吧

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Dear Weian

Is everything okay now , Weian? . Disaster was out of our expectation(Disasters are always out of our anticipation).Wehave no ability to struggle with an inevitability but to suffer fromit(bear/accept it) speechlessly. Every calamity causes lots of deaths and injuries(casualties).Deathis a process that we all must pass. Looking away will be betterbut not bittered(bitter).


I am convinced that the day of Sichuan Earthquake was engraved onyour memory deeply. i know that you got a sense of guilty(guilt) owing to witnessing the death of your parents. you accused yourself ofdoing nothing to rescue your parents. Don't be too depressed with(about) it,how can a child conquer with such an immense catastrophe? You may thinkof commiting(committing) suicide to end your precious life. Listen carefully, itis not what your parents want. What you can do is to be an indepentent(independent)boy.For the sake of your parents, for the sake of yourself and forthesake of thousands and millions of victims in this earthquake. Lifeisvaluable.

Despite losing your parents, you are not living alone, Alongside withyou are thousands of children. But(why use but??) they have a dream whichis fulfilling the dream of their parents. Some are studying hard while some are crying. Which one do you want to be? If crying can revive the life of your parents, you can keep crying. If it is useless ,stop crying and do the thing which is worth doing (it). Bear in mind,studying in university is every parents's dream. Give you a try , try tostudyhard.

You need not worry about the fee(s) of your study. Provided that you are willing to study, we are here to help you. Also, some charities are also allocating money on helping victims to study. Without parents,you should be more perseverant , more indepentent. Even when your parents cannot take care of you anymore, they are looking at you in somewhere and giving you a forever(forever cannot be adj.) blessing. Your parents are not here,but their love is surrounding you. Don't give up! Make adifferent life!

yours sincerely
Chris Wong

我覺得應該C 藍色個d係我覺得怪但係唔知點改 = = 同埋有d chinglish

[ 本帖最後由 tn01025391 於 2009-5-6 07:58 PM 編輯 ]

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唔該你
哈哈 睇黎好多mistakes...

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