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唔知ce咩level呢?..pass or not??


The government wants to know what students think about the following problems they sometimes have at secondary schools in Hong Kong:

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having no one to talk to about personal problems

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unfair treatment from teachers

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peer pressure from classmates

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too much homework


You have been asked to write a report on at least two of these problems and suggest ways in which they can be solved.

Write your report.


In this day and age, many students at secondary schools have the following problems. However, most of them often do not know how to solve it which becomes a focus of public concern.

First of all, many of students have difficulty finding a person who can be talked about their personal problems such as they feel unhappy in family or cannot get along well with classmates. It will cause a bad affect if they bear the problems alone for a long time. Therefore, parents and teachers should pay more attention to whether the students’ behavior is strange suddenly. Otherwise, schools should make a forum for students to talk their personal problems and teachers reply them on the Internet. It’s more convenient and students are more willing to talk their problems.


Furthermore, seldom had they have such much homework before they became a secondary student. They cannot handle it in time, thus feeling very pressured and losing their interests in learning. However, if they are allowed to hand in their homework in enough time, they will feel more relaxed and satisfied with studying. Schools should transfer a positive message to let students know why teachers require they do such much homework. It is because they can benefit from the homework. Only by constant practice can they improve their knowledge.

In my view, it is ever so important that schools, teachers and parents listening more to the students and have more communicate with them. Let them have confidence and feel interesting in studying.
   

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Level 2~3
都有唔少grammar 錯
同埋個tone有d怪
你唔應該話"school should..."
咁樣野係要學校一定要咁做,,,語氣上有點兒唔好

Grammar 錯包括以下句子:
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1. First of all, many of students have difficulty finding a person...
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2. Furthermore, seldom had they have such much homework...
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3. They cannot handle it in time, thus feeling very pressured...
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4. However, if they are allowed to hand in their homework in enough time...
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5. ...let students know why teachers require they do such much homework
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6. Only by constant practice can they improve their knowledge.
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7. Last paragraph
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回覆 #2 傑Simon 的帖子

咁grammar錯果d句子應該點寫先正確??

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除左第2句我唔明其他果d錯咩??..唔該解答下

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most of them often do not know how to solve it which becomes a focus of public concern.

呢句錯左     應該系mo  it ge 你用which 已經夠  個which 已經代表左果d問題 所以你吾洗再用it

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