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English writing. <sporting activities>400字長文求狠批!!!
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Q: Kenneth,your good friend,has been injuredin surfing.a rather dangerous sporting activity.However,he is not going to giveup his favourite sport.Write aletter to him,explaining why he should not take part in dangerous activities.Give suggestions about other sporting activities that may suit him.
A:
Dear Kenneth,
I heard that you have been injured in surfing.Are you feeling better now? I hope that you can recover from your illness quickly and please stop surfing and any dangerous activities! I am serious!
I know you are not going to give it up. You love surfing very much.Yet,you must realize that your family and friends are scared if you injure.You have to consider our feeling, we love you so much,you know? I heard of this event, a man who passed awaybecause of surfing so please don't do it after you recovered.
Also,you never think about the consequences whatever you do.You might think that surfing is useful to improve your health .However,my dear friend,there are many activities have the same function! For example,playing basketball,playing football are also helpful,right? Although you ought to bear risk when you play any sporting activities,the truth is that any activities are safer than surfing undoubtedly.As your friend,I know you prefer to do any exciting things but you never consider the consequences whenever. Actually your life is more important than everything,it is annoying that you don't have any awareness.
I extremely expect that you can understand what I am concerning about after you read my explanation .In order to let you continue to enjoy your sporting life, some sporting activities may suit you and will be shown as follows.
Playing basketball may take indispensable assistance to you.As a basketball player,I recommend you to play it! It is funny and exciting!It helps you to meet new friends.This activity not only helps you to improve your health,but also helps you to increase your communication skill as well.
Meanwhile, swimming is also a good choice.I think this activity is suitable for you absolutely! Surfing is your favourite sport and this is the most similar to surfing!I acknowledge that it is not as exciting as surfing but it is really funny!Believe me,trying to enjoy it and you will love it!
Perhaps,the activities I suggested are not your cup of tea.Nonetheless,you must give up your favourite sportingactivities.Owing to nothing is greater than life.Best wishes to you!I hope that you will be alright in any aspects.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Love,
Chris
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