你能力較高,自己諗下邊到錯啦
1. It is difficult for Asian stars to gain popularity in foreign countries in the past.
2. … as he was one of few artists…
3. For instance, thanks to US assistance…
4. Since then, there was greater demand for high-quality entertainment.
5. Greater Asian artists expose, more popular they are.
6. It is very glad of me to…
呢三個,可以自行睇睇:
1. which was generally considered as a mission impossible at that time.
http://blog.cybertranslator.idv.tw/archives/411
2. However, the pendulum has swung the other way.
http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/other+way+round
3. It is no longer strange to see a foreign die hard fans
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/diehard
Secondly, the popularisation of internet usage increases Asian artists’ exposure in the Western world.
呢個位我建議用exposure to
It is manifested that the internet is now unprecedentedly popular.
Manifest都可以係adj,而且一般都係用it is manifest
結尾:
Tracing historical facts, we have to concede that Asia used to be a worthless region. Words like ‘savage', ‘primitive’ and ‘vulnerable’ are nothing less than its accurate descriptions.
你邊一段有詳細講過以前既野? 第一段唔計,sorry
It is very glad of me to live in an era of prosperity and advancement, where racial discrimination and deprecative remarks are not that common.
無啦啦又講咩racial discrimination? 就算係睇返第一段,你所講到既Bruce Lee果一句,都無講過呢個point
It is very appreciating that I can proudly announce, I am an Asian.
你作為一個Asian,同之前所講既entertainment industry in Asia,有咩關係? 你都係無解釋過任何野,OK?