Yours sincerely,
Chris Wong
原帖由 surelose 於 2009-5-8 10:08 PM 發表
都幾fluent,無乜亂用vocab
如果用多d connectives會仲好
但係語氣好似重左d,好似中文咁,有專卑意識
原帖由 賢兄 於 2009-5-10 10:18 AM 發表
我都係揀呢條,但我寫against果邊~
見你寫得咁好,我......@@
格式唯一唔同既係我下款寫響左邊~
PS:我寫detention isn't a suitable form of punishment. 先寫學生層面上如何唔suitable(2-3 paragraphs), ...
原帖由 仇﹏恨。 於 2009-5-10 11:45 發表
你呢種寫法應該organized過我個篇.. 我呢篇好似唔係好organized咁..
不過我驚寫not suitable marker會唔鐘意.. 但suitable又難寫..
原帖由 賢兄 於 2009-5-10 12:17 PM 發表
我諗唔會掛~
都唔知自己有冇離題,最後俾d suggestions個principal~
嘩,你上年5*, 羨慕
PS:我用d Vocab個 range冇你咁多bor @@ (sigh)
原帖由 賢兄 於 2009-5-11 01:05 PM 發表
講下點解not suitable先la~
pt1: Not effective (The problem still exists)
pt2: Violate student's rights
pt3: Sometimes is useless (students sometimes behave badly during detention)
pt4 (Fo ...
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