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[意見] UE 作文求評 有C嗎?

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UE 作文求評 有C嗎?

DearEditor,
As acabinet member of last year’s Student Union, I think there are three importantcriteria that we have to bear in mind when electing the new president, namelyability to communicate between school authority and students, eagerness toserve, and leadership, in order to prevent history of last year’s situationfrom repeating.


Communicationis of utmost importance. The president has a constitutional role to play of bridgingthe school authority and students. Last year, the communication between theschool authority and students was bad. Last year, the gulf of difference inopinion was huge when the school imposed an all-out ban on mobile phones andattempted to renew the contract with the atrocious canteen caterer. The schoolwas ignorant to student’s dismay and frustration, while the students misunderstoodthe school’s intentions. Antagonism arose. The discrepancy is fuelled by thepresident, quite literally, did nothing but cross his arms, watching the eventsunfold. He failed his task for communication. Last year saw a bad communicativesituation.


The sayingthat communication is an art carries much truth. How much would the situationimprove if the then-president could lobby the headmistress to delay the implantationof the mobile phone ban? The new president should be able to channel student’sdismay towards certain school policies, and help explain to us the good-heartedintention of the school. Whoever possess the endownment of communicativeprowess fit the pose of president.


It isalso worth pointing out the eagerness to serve is another important quality.The president of the SU is anything but an easy job. The past student unions ofour school (except last year’s) set a high standard for the activities—organizing4 inter-school programme on average each year. Our student’s expect the newpresident to raise the bar. He needs to not only bargain with the school, butalso plan myriad extra-curricular activities for us, and, of course, executethose plans—not to mention that he has to deal with his own academic persuasion.He would have to shoulder heavy responsibly. One without eagerness to serve,enthusiasm to work, and ardency to be in the pose would probably collapse withso much pressure. Speaking of what happened last year, the then-president toldus, the cabinet, during a meeting, that he ran for election just for fun, and forthe feeling of gaining control, and did not expect the job to turn out to be sostrenuous. As you all know, he then resigned. The mayhem and anarchy in thecabinet that followed his resignation illustrated how important it is to have apresident who is eager to serve. A new president who is apathetic and uncaringis the last thing on my wish list. Enthusiasm to serve makes one diligent andresponsible.


Speakingof enthusiasm, it is also imperative to make the cabinet enthusiastic. So thethird point is the leadership skill. The student union is not a one-man job. Theteam can only work well when there is good specialization and a sense oftogetherness. A prodigious leader knows how to delegate well, which is toassign tasks matriculously and intervene strategically when things go wrong. Thiscan unite the cabinet into a common goal. Clinging onto power and refusing todelegate, like what last year’s president did, was no good.


Ofcourse, there are other qualities that I expect the new president to possess—foresight,reasonably proficient language skills, etc. But what happened last year is alesson which we should take. To prevent what happened last year from repeatingagain, the new president needs to be a skillful communicator, an ardentservant, and a prodigious leader.


Yoursfaithfully,
ChrisWong
   

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can anyone help and grade the essay?

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I think it is quite good!
it is relevant and coherance

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i think this deserves a solid C, just because it is not bad enough to be graded  a D

good luck.

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Yoursfaithfully,----------------------------------------------------------->>>???

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