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英文2013 paper2 q4 求評

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question: Many people say that private school bus service operators do not follow proper safety procedures when dealing with young children and they argue that this may pose a danger. Write a letter to the Bus Operators Association of Hong Kong to express your concerns and give three recommendations for how private school bus services can be improved.


Dear Sir or Madam,

  I am writing to express my concern on the safety of your private school bus service. From time to time there has been news reports about young pupils being injuried in their way school on the school bus. The overspeeding driving、the lack of bus escorts and installations on seat belts are probably the causes of such many accidents. Nevertheless, the problem actually can be eliminated by improving the private bus service. Here are some recommendations on altering the private bus service.
  
  To commence with, it is essential to have strong enforcement and mandatory installation of seatbelts. Given that over a quarter of school buses are not attached with seat belts, students are more possibly to be inflicted fatal injuries when a car accident takes place. For an instance, when a serious car collision happening, pupils without seat belts buckled on will most likely to be hurled out of the bus. Therefore, making belts installation compulsory in every private school bus is the most feasible way to prevent any pivotal harm on the children in a casualty.

  Besides, having a bus escort in every school bus is literally a must. There has been news revealing that not every school bus offers the service of bus escorts. It is immensely risky for the pupils to have no nanny accompanying them in the school bus as they may behave dangerously in the bus without any guidance. For examples, the teenagers may forget to fasten seat belts or even jog around in the bus. In these cases, not only the pupils will stumble and get hurt easily once if the bus stops suddenly, but also the driver may be disturbed from driving, which will potentially lead to car accidents. Hence, it is crucial to have bus escort in every school bus to guide the young children.

  Last but not least, school bus drivers should be penalized for breaking the speed limit. Constantly, there are complains lodged by parents about the bus driver driving at an excessive speed. It is extremely dangerous to have pupils taking those overspeeding buses. Not to mention fatal car accidents, students may be exposed to a higher risk of banging their head in the bus. Only if the drivers be punished seriously for carrying out excess speed driving, can deter them from doing so. Therefore, serious punishment, such as suspension of license, is vital.

  Pupils can only be served with a safe private school bus service. Improvements need to be made immediately. I sincerely hope that my recommendations can be considered.

Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
   

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