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小 發表於 2016-4-7 09:44 PM (第 2933 天)
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I think it's level 3.
First of all, you should enrich your content.
When the topic asks you to provide some possible solutions, you should not merely talk about one stakeholder.
How about the other agency?
Can school, media and parents do something to help with the situation?
Your grammar is not really a big problem.
some suggestions here:
The face of the situation is entirely opposite
The situation is entirely opposite.
What are the results of running out of landfills place
What is the consequence of running out the space of the landfills?
Good luck in DSE