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[Eng] FREE HKDSE Writing Analysis by Native English Speaker

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FREE HKDSE Writing Analysis by Native English Speaker

Hi everyone,

This is Ray. I am a Native English speaker.

I noticed that there are a lot of you that are looking for support for your HKDSE English.

I would like to help you improve your English writing skills.

To do so, I will post a HKDSE writing topic here every week and ONCE a week I will select ONE of the writing pieces posted here to correct. I will provide you with feedback and it will be posted in this thread for everyone to learn from . I wish I could do more, but that is all I could commit to for the time being.

Basically, I will proofread one of your essays and post my feedback here.

I will only do this if 5 of you reply to this thread and say that you are interested! If less than 5 reply by next Sunday then I will not continue with this plan. This is for free, and all of you will benefit.

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A little bit about myself:

- I have have taught non-Native English Speakers for more than 5 years on a part-time basis
- The students I have taught been awarded multiple awards. More importantly MANY have have won both public speaking and writing awards. Many of those students are from Band 1 or international schools.

If you have any questions, feel free to send me a private message or post it on this group.

[ 本帖最後由 ray.sir 於 2016-10-30 11:21 PM 編輯 ]
   

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count me please

count me please

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thksss

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thkss

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thank you

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Goodd

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Great!

Thank you for the feedback. I noticed that there are 4 replies with one double post so far.

1 more yes and we can get this started.

Ray

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So.. I am the number five    thanksss

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thank a lot

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I'm in.

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