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Some People prefer to live in  a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Althoughsome people enjoy living house with bigger space for activities, living inapartment provides more advantages than living in house.


First ofall, apartment can resolve housing problem in most cities like Great TorontoArea. As we all know that more people are moving to major cities now to find abetter job opportunity. It causes a serious burden to building more livingspace. Given the same size of land, apartment can serve around 60-80 familieswhile house may only serve 2-3 families.


Second,apartment can provides a lot of facilities that house cannot. For example, mostmodern and new apartment have swimming pools and gym for their residents. Someapartments may even provide clubhouse with a lot of different function rooms,such as study rooms, piano rooms and game rooms etc. People doesn’t need tocost too much to enjoy these facilities because they may pay a minimum monthlymanagement fee only. Compare with owning and building a swimming pool in yourhouse, it’s truly to save a person and society’ costs.


Third,in terms of housework maintenance, it’s more efficient to clean an apartmentthan a house because there is no backyard and basement. Generally speaking, thebiggest backyard you have, the most time spending when you have to maintain itsappearance. Not only it’s a nightmare during winter’s snowing period but alsoleaves falling season in spring.


A lot ofpeople enjoy living in house because there’s a lot more space for kids to runand play. However, it may increase the shortage of housing problem in thebiggest city, costs a lot more for individual’s spending to enjoy morefacilities and waste people’s time to do the household duties. To conclude, Ithink living in a house having more disadvantages than advantages whencomparing with living in an apartment.
   

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