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15DSE PP Q.4
Learning English through Social Issue
Many parents in Hong Kong are sending their children to other countries to  complete their schooling. Write an article for your school magazine examining two reasons for this phenomenon. You should also discuss the impact of this on local schools and on children who leave to study overseas.

A mixed blessing - children study overseas
            Recently,there has been an increase in the number of parents in Hong Kong sending their children to other countries to complete their schooling –have you ever wondered why ?The prevalence of such a phenomenon arouses wide concern among various circles in Hong Kong.It is worthwhile to take a glance at the reasons for this tide as well as the impacts upon local schools and those children who study abroad.

          First and foremost , it is patently obvious that the flawed education system in Hong Kong is one of the cruxes.A recent survey reveals the fact that a majority of students in Hong Kong are unanimous in a thought : Hong Kong education system puts much pressure on them .It can be ascribed to the spoon-feeding education and one-shot public examination- HKDSE. An excessive workload is therefore assigned by their teachers.In this way ,hardly can students have sufficient pastime and relaxation.In the long run,it probably makes negative influences to their mental health.With a view to helping children escape from the dire situation,many parents hope their children study overseas .Learning without stress ,children are able to lead a delightful existence and grow up healthily.As a result ,the problematic education system in Hong Kong is a culprit of this trend.

            Another rationale behind this phenomenon is that the significance of commanding proficient languages except to Cantonese.Hong Kong,as a multi-cultural society,is a sought-after place for travelling,business,investment to name but a few.A considerable number of people from all over the globe come to Hong Kong as a result.With this in mind,it is of paramount importance to be acquianted with diverse languages so as to communicate with the partners or tourists from foreign countries.Given that children can gain more opportunities to apply other language when they study overseas,their language proficiancy can be enhanced efficiently.It is able to sharpen their competitive edge in society.As the chance of getting a well-paid job increases,their future seems bright from the parents' point of view.Under this line of thinking,it is not surprising to see parents prefer to let their children study abroad.

          While it seems to be an impressive decision on the basis of the above perks,the impacts upon the local schools and  children who leave to study oversea should not be neglected.

              It should be noted that the local schools may risk the possibility of closing down.There is no doubt that the number of students who study at local schools declines when many children are sent to the foreign countries.Therefore,the local schools,particularly the low-banking ones,may admit inadequate students.In this manner,it is arduous for them to embark on an academic semester in that they may face financial problems afterwards.Eventually , they have to stop continuing providing services , ending with closing down.As a consequence,this tide may bring catastrophic repercussion to the local schools.

               From the children's point of view,the unfamiliar environment presumably poses a wide spectrum of problems.Living in new environment ,the children may still not have great command
of the local language ,which make children unlikely to cooperate with other students when they need to finish group projects .Furthermore ,barely can they have basic conversations with the locals , let alone make new friends.Worse still , it makes decline in their mental quality as they are not resilient enough and worried about the said problems at all times.In light of this , this tide may pose deleterious effects to the children.

                The phenomenon that many children are sent to the foreign countries completing their schooling seems to be a mixed blessing.It is hoped that the children are able to receive education in impressive condition , no matter where they study .

[ 本帖最後由 austinhin726 於 2016-12-27 01:14 PM 編輯 ]
   

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