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DSE Eng Writing 求狠評......

Question: (2016DSE)
4. Learning English through Debating
It has recently been reported that some parents in Asiancountries are installing apps on their children’s mobile phones that monitortheir activities to ensure that they use these devices responsibly.

Write a letter to the Young Post stating whether you agreewith these parents’ actions or not. Justify your position with three reasons.




Dear Editor,


   I'm writing to express my point of view on the recent issue that parents tend to install apps for surveillance on their children. ”Tiger mom”, “monster parents”, “helicopter parents”, to name but just a few, are in fact some derogatory terms portraying the strict Asian parents who place much emphasis on their children's academic results. It is comprehensible and acceptable as academy is of pivotal importance to the future career of the children. However, things have gone to the extremity. Some parents even install applications in phone to scrutinize their children. After my meticulous rumination as a whole, the act of installing applications for monitoring is in no way justifiable.


   When it comes to the justification for my position, three major reasons are prominent, with the first being the faltering of the children's curiosity. In the context of globalization, we enjoyed more information and we possess different more materials. There are ample of things for our carefree children to explore. Children, being curious of this world of “unknown and uncertainty”,will find it interesting in the course of probing into the world. For example,they would make use of the mobile phone to search for some stories they are interested in; they would capitalize on the phone to play games; they would try to learn to dial. It is conspicuous that the mobile phone is the key to opening the door of “uncertainty” for them, enabling them to have a full picture of the whole world. In other words, mobile phone is the advocates of exploration and provides insight and enlightenment to the children since the early age. However some parents now install applications which monitor their children this gravely impede the progress of learning and exploration from their children as their freedom to serve different kinds of net is restricted. Curiosity is of great essence to the mentality of the children in early age. Installing this kind of application would just strangle and stifle their children’s curiosity because the impetus to learning is inhibited under the scrutiny of the parents. With this in mind,it is an incontestable truth that such seemingly harmless act actually kills Children's curiosity and affects their psychological development.


   Alongside the impediment to the Curiosity, the hindrance to the inculcation of morality is also another justification that deserves our attention. It is universally acknowledged that parents have a decisive role to play in the development of their children. Being the most proximate person to the children, parents should develop close relationship between children. It's not only the school, but also the children's parents that should inculcate correct morality and disposition into children's mind. Allegiance, loyalty,righteousness, kindness, trust, to a name but just a few, are some vital temperament and attributes that parents should instill to their children's mind. However, upon the installation of such kind of Garden applications, children may find it reluctant to talk with their parents as they are afraid of their parents absolute Authority; consequently, a sense of fear will develop. The seed of antipathy and distrust will then be sowed. Eventually, the evil fruit of disobedience and rebellion will be harvested when the children grow up. They think that their parents don't trust them. The sense of protection and proximity given by the parents vanished. A huge gap of distrust appeared within the relationship. The children don't trust their parents, let alone learn the morality instilled by their parents. It's apparent that the installation of monitoring apps will result in the distrust between children and parents and undermines the progress of the inculcation of correct morality like and intrepidity.


   Some naysayers may counter my stance, saying that the current world and the information on the Internet is obsessed with adultery and violence and it is a must to install monitoring apps to bar children from getting access to this kind of indecent information. At first glance, it seems to be rational and understandable. However, on close examination, the statement is unfounded and unjustifiable. Irrefutably, our internet is full of this kind of information which needs parental guidance; nonetheless, does it mean that this kind of information has no educational value? Certainly not. The blind pursuits of heroism, Tribe gang, obsession with pornography in teenagers in the current society are not attributed to the early exposure to the related materials. It Is the misconception toward sex and violence that speaks volume about the current high juvenile crime rates and teenage pregnancy. If children can have access to this kind of information, their first impression toward sex and violence will develop. If parents can help explain the correct mindset or rectify their misconception toward sex and violence at early age, the children will then have a clear mind and filter all these indecent materials automatically for the rest of their life. In other words, early exposure to such information will make it easier for parents to instill the correct mindset of sex and violence. It is a great opportunity for the children to learn and comprehend the same thing from another angle. With this in mind, how come installing monitoring apps would be a good idea?


   The Greek educationist and philosopher Aristotle once said, “The root of education is bitter, but the fruit is sweet”. It is unarguable that mobile phone is the stepping stone for children to gain greater recognition to the rest of the world. In light of this, it is my fervent conviction that the parents should in no way install these surveillance applications.


Yours faithfully,


ChrisWong (signature)


ChrisWong

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