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Question: There is a well-known Chinese saying which translates into English as “Strict teachers produce outstanding students”. What is your opinion? Write an essay giving three reasons to support your views on the saying. Provide a suitable title for your essay.


                                                                                                                                                Teachers Should Not Be Lenient To Students
It is widely acknowledged that teachers were stricter in the past as they always highlighted the necessity of students’ discipline. This resulted in our older generation perform much better in terms of virtue. It is common to see them being kind and chatting with others in courteous. And since possessing these virtues help promote a harmonious society, teachers should advocate the importance of it to students as early as possible.  However, the sad truth reveals as teachers nowadays are lenient to students. Teachers often left students themselves on their own, letting them to do whatever they want. Even more, the advocators of it often claim that being lenient helps nurture students’ academically and mentally. But whether teachers being strict are advantageous or not, really depends on several factors. In my opinion, the Chinese saying “Strict teachers produce outstanding students” has some truth init and it is high time for teachers to be stricter.


In terms of helping students learn effectively, we all know that being strict means high expectations on students’ academic works. Not every child is in possession of having a well-organized manner when handling different tasks which include completing homework or doing  projects .Students often mess up with their tasks because of recklessness.  If students’ behaviors and attitudes towards completing homework are monitored by their teachers, this will do more good than harm as teachers would be demanding by stressing the importance of pursuing perfection.  Without question,at first, students may be in the burden of heavy workload or immense pressure.But after some time, these will be ease off. Once students get used to teachers being strict in rectifying mistakes in tasks and pursuing excellent ,students’would perform above par in exams .  


Another reason I would like to put forth is that teachers being strict helps enhance ones’ soft skills, which includes the wisdom of resolving conflicts, having effective communications with others and the like.  These are all particularly essential when students entering the society as others are likely to use soft skills to measure one’s ability in every aspects . Thus, teachers’ putting emphasis on students’ verbal skills is encouraged . And it can be done effectively through by strict teachers , for instance,  they often tell their students under no circumstances should a student utter any unfavorable words. This prevents students’ from making mistakes in formal occasions or sparkling others’ outrageousness in terms of languages being used .  For lenient teachers, they rarely pay attention to students’ verbal skills and behaviors and leave them to say whatever they like or even tolerate their behavior .


In addition, strict teachers can instill good values such as being considerate, conscienceless and  importance of being contributive to community into students so that they can truly be good students and good citizens at the same time. Nowadays, more and more children become spoiled brats. Their parents are in lack of time take caring their beloved kids. Parents work all around the the clock and continuously immersing themselves in working environment. Sometimes,they deviated from the normal path, being obsessed with finding more money . As a result, neglecting to instill  suitable values to their kids is quite often. Thus, strict teachers can seize the opportunity to act as a remedy by instilling desirable values to students.
To conclude, strict teachers are important for students’ soft skills , learning ability , as well as instillation of favorable values . Students who are left on their own with no strict guidance often easily fall into the traps in this materialistic society, where different evils can influence them instantly. Therefore strict teachers are urgently and promptly called for.   


[ 本帖最後由 kennethdse 於 2017-3-4 02:14 AM 編輯 ]
   

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