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Between the lessons

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Between the lessons

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Between the lessons

Daydreaming,
Looking upon the blackboard,
I realised that
the drastic, green ocean
drowning those white hedgehogs.

They were screaming,
crossing their fingers.
I felt sympathy,
wondering who would give hands.

A crash of white bubbles
with a gigantic ship,
no more yelling, it's silent.

Moon shining on the ocean,
staring at the ship.
It's magnificent.
It's concrete.
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  • catter_kir 論壇積分 +3 原創內容 2009-10-29 07:17 PM
   

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very good poem.

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very good poem

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唔錯啊的poem啊!!

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is it a poem?
i ilke it~

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