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見大家這麽喜歡這道題目,我又來試試………………狠狠地踩吧


Wisdom and appearance are two important judging factors of people. Someone like to be beautiful but someone want to be clever. I think 'it is more important to be clever than beautiful or handsome'.

  Being clever can help personal development. A smart person may have valuable personal qualities, e.g. critical thinking and creativity, which are far more essential than beauty. As people will become old one day, they will lose their attractive outlook. But these qualities will follow them throughout their lifetime.

  Wisdom can improve social relationships. A pretty or handsome outlook may help in meeting new friends, but it cannot help in developing close relationships. A pretty but dull girl would not be popular in a party. Oppsitely, a normal-looking girl with gorious talking skills would catch people's eyes. In real life, there are various cases like this.

  In a knowledge-based society, cleverness plays a major role in jobs. A good appearance certainly helps in the interview. But the main concern of working abilities is always not the appearance. For example, Kung Yu Sum does not have a beautiful outlook but she is a very successful businesswoman. When we are working, we are using our brains but not our faces. People still have to use their wisdom to solve problems and get opportunities, even they work in some industries which relay on appearance.Take an instance, there are many beautiful ladies want to be a top model but only those with minds can achieve their dreams.

  To be charming and popular, the key is not appearance but wisdom.



hae作…………
但 有沒有可能合格????

[ 本帖最後由 englit 於 2009-5-6 04:59 PM 編輯 ]
   

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都好hea下wo

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其實預左writing 好差,合格就算了

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hea作-口-  我作得肯定比你差-__-

仲有啊  乜小甜甜打扮得唔靚咩 哈哈

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用了<30min  + 對電腦作,其實no feel, 如果出了一題環保的題目,包保有feel,有vocal。

小甜甜的美,不是常人(如我)可以欣賞到的

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回覆 #1 englit 的帖子

Grade:5*

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不要胡亂用 outlook 一字
outlook 不是解作 "外表"
(this is a common mistake made by HK students)
Cogito, ergo sum

耳中常聞逆耳之言,心中常有拂心之事,纔是進德修行的砥石。
若言言悅耳,事事快心,便把此生埋在鴆毒中矣。
<<菜根譚>>

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引用:
原帖由 treebear 於 2009-5-6 05:25 PM 發表
不要胡亂用 outlook 一字
outlook 不是解作 "外表"
(this is a common mistake made by HK students)
不如開個post,講一講common mistakes made by HK students????

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