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Topic: your friend, kely, a unversity student studying architecture, he would like to become a singer upon graduation. Write an e-mail to him, giving hime your advice.



Dear kely,
      I've got your letter just now. You said you wanted to become a singer upon graduation. But I wonder whether it is a good idea.

      Well, you're studying architecrture at Hong Kongf University. Becoming a singer is entirely new for you. You didn't have similar experience about being a singer. So,I'd advise you apply a job that is related to your study, like architect, rather than becoming a singer upon graduation.

     On the other hand, have you thought of how many things you need to handle after becoming a singer? Once you became a successful singer, you will be surerounded by many paparazzi. Your privacy life will be always put under spotlights. Also, when you've done something wrong, even a little, you will be criticized by all the people in society. You can imagine how terrible the situation is, right?

     You know, the wages of a singer is very unstable. Many singers can only affort their daily living. They need to spend a lot on their work, body, clothing. They need to keep themselves in the best condition all the time. Can you affort it? I know you have 3 smaller sisters who are studing in secondary school. you always said that you need to bear some of the household expenses after you graduated. So, I really hope that you can think of becoming a singer deeper.

    For me, I really don't think that becoming a signer is a good choice for you. But if you insist for doing so, I'll still totally support your choice. Time to go now. I look forward to seeing your reply.

Love,
Chris wong






大慨有咩GRADE??THANKS!!
   

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原帖由 7s711 於 2009-5-7 11:12 AM 發表
Briefly have a look..

格式錯左, - 1個grade

your studies, like being an architect

Once you (      )?

will always be put

even though just a little

is, can't you?

bodies, and cl ...
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thanks!!

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回覆 #3 司機 的帖子

yi, email 呀.
我以為係信tim =.=
我唔sure下款係咪擺右下
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回覆 #4 7s711 的帖子

@@我記得我miss同我地講話上款同下款都擺係左面@@..不過這個問題不大
anyway thanks!!!!

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