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08CE英文作文,今次希望有level2,勁人閃入,pls,緊急

Recently our school building is going to be pulled down as part of the redevelopment of the area.

Without doubt,there are many drawback.In the build of period,their will make more pullution,
such as hearing pollution,views pollution,environment pollution....They all will make people feel sick
,annoying and uncomfortable.Besides,it will be make stundts cannot to pay attention on the book
.Of course,the teachers are certainly can't teach the book.

Although there are many disadvantage,their can be aviod.First,the school building can pulled
down as part while in the evening.So the won't have a problem of block thecher or students have
a lessons.Second,we can grow some trees around the pollution area,so they will decrease the
pollution problems.

Furthermover,their also will bring us many benefits.First,when they will been finished,their
can build more new building.The new building can be more advanced where can have high-technology
house,big computer rooms and big area to playing activities.Moreover they can be make more
beautiful of the school appearances.

Finally,The adventages are more than drawback,so i think pulled down as part of school building is
a good idea.

請吊得就吊,我想拿level2,故今晚要see曬本grammar,Hope俾多d評語

[ 本帖最後由 卍龍少卍 於 2009-5-7 08:18 PM 編輯 ]
   

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你好大劑   grammar唔少錯
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"First,the school building can pulled down as part while in the night"
明顯犯法不可行

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Second,we can grow some trees around the pollution area,so they will decreace the
pollutin problems.

around the polluted area??
so the pollution problems can be reduced

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such as hearing pollution,views pollution,environment pollution
應該係noise pollution ,同visual pollution

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禁係味得一等

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Of cause

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請問有無d代替first ,second個d字

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好多Chinglish...

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點解不停用their??
their都唔係咁用
比多d拓展

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回覆 #7 卍龍少卍 的帖子

of coz, some word can represent first, second, last..
First-> First and foremost,To begin with,To start with
Second->In addition,What's more,Apart from....
Last->To summarize,In recapitulation,Last but by no means least,Last but by no account
least..and so on.

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