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小 發表於 2009-5-6 02:23 PM (第 5441 天)
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Topic; “It is more important to be clever than beautiful or handsome” Do you agree?
Dear Editor,
It has been a trend that more and more people are going after the physical beauty through all kinds of methods, such as losing weight, in order to catch the others’ eyes.However, although physical beauty can draw the attention of the others, nevertheless, to be clever can be used as a tool to energize our lives. Therefore, I consider that to be clever is more meaningful than physcial beauty to us because of the following perspective:
Firstly, to be clever is the key to success. It is unbaised to say that cleverness plays an extremely esssential role in our life, no matter for academic achievement or job performance. Not mentioning that cleverness is able to keep our mind lucid when the trouble occurs, but also providing us the most appropriate way to solve the problems. In comparison of the physical beauty, a lovly appearance is useless to improve this circumstance.
Secondly, clever mind can keep company with us all our life while physical beauty is short-lived to us. Without doubt, the change of our appearance relies on our growth, therefore, the physical beauty will be lost as the time past. However, intelligence can be remained in our lifetime, it can glorify our lives by offering the most suitable lifestyle and give hope to us so that we can take an optimistic glance into the future..Thus, I think that to be clever is more vital than physical beauty.
Thirdly, to be clever can help us establish the interpersonal relationship. Communicating with other' is indispensable to human. An excellent network of interpersonal relationship is crucial since it can foster our ablility of academic study and moral education. Moreover, our life can be more colorful when the sincered friends are always by our side. But why it can pose such a postive influence on us? That’s all about understanding. To be clever helps us to know the other better.When we are talking with the others, it is possible to analyze what kind of person he/she is and what he/she is in need of by our clear mind. As a result, the understanding of friends supports us to establish our tnterpersonal relationship.
To conclude, we can take lots of advantages if we are clever, such as analysis, mental possessing skills, and it’s one type of ability that we can use once-and-for-more, but physical beauty is short-lived to us. Only if we are clever can we improve our lives, hence, I prefer to be clever than to be beautiful.
Your faithfully
Chris Wong
Chris Wong
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